Friday 29 January 2016

Modest Aura

Spring, Lyle
Ryker Theyrn was finally going to have his own kingdom. He had been taken from his birth parents because of a mark on his cheek, and raised as a prince. It was a system that had worked for more than a century now; babies who were born bearing the mark were taken in by the church and later gifted land to rule over. The Brotherhood believed that those who had the mark were descendant from their prophet and hero, King Theyrn. Theyrn had gathered all the savage men and women, ending all wars and creating the empire of Glyndwr. Ryker was the first commoner born with the mark in fifty years, and his ascension to kinghood was finally here. The Brotherhood had chosen an island called Lyle, which had been inhabited only by a few mercenaries for several years now.
Ryker and his advisors had arrived barely a day ago; the land was very flat, consisting of diving valleys that stretched out toward the horizon. The island was small; however the open fields almost tricked the eye. The air felt cleaner somehow, and Ryker felt a swelling in his chest for the island. Lyle would be a good place, he believed, a good place to raise a family and live harmoniously, he would make sure of it.

“Sire,” Arni called from behind where Ryker stood. “Are you ready to meet your queen?”
“I’m not king yet, Arni” Ryker replied over his shoulder. “And she’s not my wife yet, so how could she be my queen?”
Arni laughed cheerfully in agreement. Ryker was not certain on his thoughts of the men the Brotherhood had sent to be his advisors. Arni – the senior of the two, had a large belly for a man sworn to serve the church. And the other, Leif, appeared to be younger than Ryker himself. But in a way he was relieved to be away from the constant gaze of the Brotherhood, as he was finally being given the freedom to become his own man.

“Sire?” Arni asked tentatively, appearing at Ryker’s side. “You’re being very quiet.”
“I’m full of thought,” Ryker answered. “What do you know of this woman they’re sending me?”
“She’s very beautiful,” Arni said persuasively.
“You’ve already told me that,” Ryker replied with a snigger. “What about her temperament? And her personality?”

The older man gave a desperate shrug, and Ryker turned away from him with a sigh. He supposed it didn’t matter, he had to marry her no matter what she was like. The Brotherhood had spent a long time trying to find the right woman for him, so he’d been told. Originally he’d been informally betrothed to Princess Neith – daughter of the High King Rylan. He wasn’t completely informed on why that betrothal never went ahead, but he’d never really imagined himself married to Neith either.
Ryker looked up hesitantly as the ramp was lowered onto the sand; he cleared his throat and nervously straightened his back and squared his shoulders. Three figures made their way deftly down onto the beach, each hooded and cloaked with their faces hidden. Two of the women stood either side the one who Ryker guessed to be his future wife. He stepped forward as the women came to stop in front of him.

“Welcome,” he said. “This is Lyle, and I am Ryker.”
“If you’re Ryker,” the woman on left blurted. “Where’s your crown?”
“He has yet to be crowned,” scolded the woman on the right.
Ryker nodded, hiding a smile. “That’s correct, I’ll be crowned once the building of the church is completed.”

“As it is written, ‘a church of the Brotherhood cannot be called so without the crowning of a king to bless the stone.’”
Ryker blinked and looked at the woman who had spoken; she stood with a reserved kind of grace and was noticeably shorter than the other two. Her head was dropped low and he couldn’t quite see her face, but Ryker felt the flutter of excitement in him. He swooped toward her and reached for her hand. She pulled away at first, surprised by his sudden approach, but relaxed her hand into his. 
“I’m Ryker,” he said to her alone.
“My… Name is Leda,” she replied shyly. 

He did not move away – he stood there waiting and watching her. She stared away from him, with her head tilted down. He still had not seen her face. Slowly, she began to inch her gaze up at him, and he waited patiently. He liked her already, for some reason. Perhaps it was the softness in her, the quiet and modest aura she possessed. Whatever it was, he told himself, he would have to send a thank you note to the Brotherhood.  

3 comments:

  1. First official post! I've been playing around with this hood for awhile, I honestly think I needed a break from Marlowe. The extremism of Marlowe gets to my head, so Lyle is going to be a lot less sexist and racist.

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  2. Heeey, new kingdom! :)

    Heh, yeah, sometimes it's good to take a step back from a story if writing it is becoming draining. I love Marlowe, but yeah, I'd imagine how working with the minds of the people who live there would be exhausting. Here's to Lyle balancing Marlowe out! :)

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    1. I didn't know if you would see this! That's exactly the plan, while Marlowe is rampant with sex and discrimination, Lyle is more religiously based.

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